Vampireman - A Review of Mark Allen's "Nocturnal" by Martin Kilkenny Stride

 


“Like a big black bat flapping it’s wings”.  So the demon Vampire of Mark Allen’s “Nocturnal” is described by Razor, one of the many doomd adversaries he shortly consigns to a gruesome death.  Elsewhere the well-dressd anti-hero betrays fastidious annoyance at the bullets Ronald just fired into him ruining his $400 cashmere sweater, and fear of another victim’s blood splattering his shoes.

There is little else that seems to scare the Vampire, and indeed little else that he has in common with the aristocratic vampires of modern popular culture, besides black hair and pale skin.  The son of an immigrant butcher who died young, he leaves school to go to work and support his mother, only to turn to a life of crime.  Brutal in life, he suffers a gangster’s death and is then consignd to forever atone for the evil deeds he committed in life by picking out for his murderous revenge the vicious and useless “human garbage” such as T-Ball, the junkie crook he kills by puncturing his carotid artery.

This vampire possesses eyes black like a shark’s, not red, and can be destroyd only by decapitation, not a wooden stake through the heart.  He sleeps in a darkend bedroom rather than a crypt, drives a car (although how he learnd this skill is never divulged) and holds down a job (despite having 27 million dollars in the bank).  In many ways, therefore, he carries on his living death as though he were a normal man.  Most significantly, he has morals and principles, only wishing to target “human garbage” like T-Ball, despite their poor-quality blood, and sparing those who show courage or compassion.  He is short, only 5 foot 6 in height, as well as skinny, yet possesses powers no normal man would, being stronger, faster, impervious to bullets, and with better hearing.  He can jump 50 feet across 4 lanes of street. 

He is not afraid of crosses.  But then why would he be, when he is clearly atoning for his sins in life by performing good deeds in death?  Some aspects of this book and it’s antihero revive traditions of vampirism which predate those of modern Anglophone culture, such as peasant rather than aristocratic origins and slaughter by decapitation, yet at the same time Allen’s attempts to humanize his monster, combined with the supernatural powers with which he’s been mysteriously endowd, succeed in pushing him away from accustomd notions of how a vampire is supposed to be, and into the realms of the modern American superhero.

Some elements of the vampire’s behaviour don’t make sense.  If he can store blood in a fridge for later use why not use his powers to simply raid hospital blood-banks?  For that matter, why does he bother to avoid law enforcement?  Others make more sense than the modern celluloid vampire of Hollywood and Hammer, such as his lack of libido.  Some passages in the story seem irrelevant, even bizarre, such as the Vampire pausing to lecture us about the 2008 financial crash.  Others are grossly over-detaild and just unnecessary, such as an intimate account of the Vampire’s digestive tract.

Allen is effective at building characters, although some of his baddies are too one-dimensional, too fleeting in the story to represent anything other than fodder for the monster’s rage.  His descriptive prose, pervaded by an attitude of cynicism, is effective at creating the world of dark sleaze and menace in which his characters move.  There are moments of genuine tenderness, such as in the vampire’s account of his last moments with the love of his life, Danae.  The vampire’s ultimate victory over those threatening his descendant Reggie is, however, too relentless, too inevitable.  He is endowd with weaknesses, such as his inability to cope with sunlight.  Some threat to these might have made the climactic scenes more dramatic and unpredictable.  It’s also a shame that the monster’s powers didn’t include good proof-reading.

“Nocturnal” is an entertaining read, especially for those who like plenty of gore with their action, and while it isn’t perfect, it succeeds where Hollywood has conspicuously faild in recent years.  In pulling his antihero Edwin Thaddeus Marx away from life he did more than just turn him into another vampire.  He transformd him into a very modern type of superhero, dark and cynical, brutal and ruthless, yet driven by morality and an indelible commitment to those he left behind.  I give this book 7/10.

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